hi can anyone who is native english speaker check if this is right please?Tell me if i should change anything

In the feature article "Island of goats and dreams",the author shares with us the heart-warming act of the locals in Tilos,a small Greek island,with the population of no more than 500, who welcomed and opened their hearts towards the refugees who fled their country for a better life.The refugees there are being integrated into Greek society,the adults are being hired,kids are getting education,but the most important,they are happy and live in humane conditions.
Tilos should be an example to other countries who should do the same thing to help and solve the refugee crisis

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Answer 1

Explanation:

you can put featured instead of feature put put goats as a capital gmake make a space between the coma and the wordalso also try to make your sentences shorter

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Help I never get English correct

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The second one is the correct answer

Answer:

I think its B

Explanation:

Which of these words is an adjective that can be used to make a sentence more descriptive?
A.
coronation
B.
apprehend
C.
squeamish
D.
precaution

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Answer:

c its the only one that can make it be more

Explanation:

Squeamish is an adjective that can be used to make a sentence more descriptive. Thus, option C is correct.

What is a sentence?

A  sentence is a group of words that is made as a  fundamental building block of language, a phrase conveys a full notion. it is made up of a subject and a predicate, that also can have an object. It can have nouns, and pronouns, adjectives and a verb

An adjective is a term that characterizes a noun's characteristics, features, or quantity of a subject or object.

Squeamish people are those who usually become sick to their stomachs. An instance of a squeamish person is someone who experiences nausea or fainting if she sees blood.

For example, Tanya used to be squeamish about traveling in the car. Therefore, option C is the correct option.

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Ryan is a university student who maintains a personal diary on his computer. At the end of the day, he writes about the events that took place and how he spent his day. The words that he frequently mentions in his diary are today, university, and professor. The moment he types the first two letters of these words, they appear as a suggestion. Which feature of the word processing program makes these suggestions?
A.
Word Completion
B.
Accept
C.
Replace
D.
Custom Options
E.
Options

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Answer:

word completion because it takes words often used to try to guess what the next word will be after seeing the first two letters match the computer suggests the word so the user doesn't have to type the word increasing work proficiency

Explanation:

Answer:

It's (A. WORD COMPLETION)

Explanation:

What is the wolfs perspective on life and death in the death of a moth

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ANSWER: In the end, Wolfe’s The Death of the Moth focuses on viewing life in a more pessimistic way. There are undeniable similarities between Dillard and Wolfe’s stories, other than the title. Both focus on life as a major theme throughout. However, the feeling the reader gets after reading the stories are drastically different.

Why does Mary go shopping?

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For food, water, clothing, shoes, necessities

Answer:

to look for a rope, blade, and a notebook with a pen for me...

Explanation:

jisatsu...

dont  do it please

take care

Brad and Alicia says they are available to babysit on Friday night. Why does this sentence need revision? 1. The subject and verb do not agree. 2. The modifier and object do not agree. 3. It contains a dangling modifier. 4. It contains a vague pronoun. WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST

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Answer:

A) THE SUBJECT AND VERB DO NOT AGREE

Explanation:

Answer:

A

Explanation:

if ylu were william shakespeare,what would you advice to potential writers?​

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Answer:

There is no perfect way to write. Writing is subjective. :)

Which situation might occur in a conflict of character versus nature? A. A society disapproves of a character’s behavior. B. A character suffers from a serious illness and eventually dies. C. Two characters argue over a difference of opinion. D. A character is unable to decide on his opinion of another character.

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Answer:

B.) a character suffers from a serious illness and eventually dies

Answer:

B

Explanation:

I got it right

A dancer took forward and backward steps of equal length during a dance. After taking 16 steps total, she was back at her starting position. How many steps did the dancer take in the forward and backward directions

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Answer:

8 steps forward and 8 steps backward

Explanation:

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

"For example," "however," and "also" are examples of:
a adjective
b conjunctions
c introductory words
d nouns

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Answer is conjunctions. Adjectives describe something and nouns are a person place or thing.

Answer:

its conjunction

Explanation:

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My life as a bat...............

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Answer:

ANy would be corrcet .Explanation:

I think it would be probably the second choice, reincarnation as an animal would be restful. After a whole complicated human life, animal lfe would seem so simple and calm.

I hope this helps! Good luck!

There are two elements that go to the composition of friendship, each so sovereign, that I can detect no superiority in either, no reason why either should be first named. One is Truth. A friend is a person with whom I may be sincere. Before him, I may think aloud. I am arrived at last in the presence of a man so real and equal that I may drop even those undermost garments of dissimulation, courtesy, and second thought, which men never put off, and may deal with him with the simplicity and wholeness, with which one chemical atom meets another. Sincerity is the luxury allowed, but diadems and authority, only to the highest rank, that being permitted to speak truth as having none above it to court or conform unto. Every man alone is sincere. At the entrance of a second person, hypocrisy begins. We parry and fend the approach of our fellow-man by compliments, by gossip, by amusements, by affairs. We cover up our thought from him under a hundred folds. I knew a man who, under a certain religious frenzy, cast off this drapery, and omitting all compliments and commonplace, spoke to the conscience of every person he encountered, and that with great insight and beauty.

What is a central idea of the passage?

A.
Sacrifice and support are important to preserve true friendships.
B.
Mutual admiration and loyalty form the bond of real friendships.
C.
Integrity and compliments form trust required in real friendships.
D.
Honesty and authenticity are the foundation for true friendships.

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Answer:

B. Mutual admiration and loyalty form the bond of real friendships.

Explanation:

Just took the test and got all correct

Answer:

D - Honesty and authenticity are the foundation to true friendships

Explanation:

got 5/5 on test

Why isn't Mr. Gore punished for murdering Demby?

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Answer:

Gore wasn't punished for the murder in any way, not even for having destroyed valuable "property." The lesson, it turns out, is that an overseer can be fired for not being cruel enough, but an occasional murder is just part of the job.

Explanation:

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6) If the feelings an author has toward his work, his theme, and his readers is
influenced by a shifting point of view, then the story's ____ is influenced.

A)style
B)syntax
C)characterization
D)tone
E)diction

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Answer:

Option D

Explanation:

Throughout literature, the concept of "tone" refers to the manner that the writer communicates his emotion across his or her prose. All throughout narrative, the mood may shift very rapidly or can stay the constant. Your utilization grammar, your viewpoint, your vocabulary, as well as the degree of detail in your composition convey the tone.

Thus, from the above we can conclude that the correct answer is option D.

Which description best explains the impact of the story’s ending

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Answer:

A good ending leaves you feeling satisfied and glad that you read the story, while a bad ending does the opposite.

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You will read a story and analyze how theme develops in the story.

View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Select the 01.04 Worksheet.

Important: Save the worksheet, immediately, to your computer or drive.
Read the story in the worksheet.
Identify the plot elements of the story under the graphic organizer. Write in complete sentences.
Write one full paragraph (or more) in response to this task: Identify the theme in "The Reefs" and explain how it develops in the story. Be sure to cite evidence from the text.
Make sure to include each of the following in your paragraph:
A topic sentence that states the theme
Several body sentences that support your answer by analyzing the setting, the protagonist, the rising action, climax, and resolution
A conclusion sentence that sums up what you have written in your paragraph
Proofread your paragraph for complete sentences, proper punctuation, and correct spelling.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work in 01.04 How Theme Develops.
The Reefs
By Marcella Morris

She clutched her lab work to her side and walked briskly towards school. The snow fell in typical New York flurries, and the ground was still icy from last night’s freeze. Careful not to slip, she climbed the steps and crossed the campus toward the science building.

"What am I doing?" she murmured. Sophie’s worst habit was talking to herself in public. "I have been warned."

"You are just a high-school kid, Sophie," they warned. "What makes you think you are capable of solving this crucial environmental issue? Stop wasting your time." The professors would not give her laboratory time to complete research nor would they share their expertise with her.

But, she could not stop.

After a snorkeling trip she took with her aunt to the coral reefs, she felt that something had shifted inside her. The snorkeling guide made one fact very clear: these colonies of tiny organisms would not last. In fact, we’d be lucky if they lasted five more years. She cared about the safety of these coral reefs more than she has cared about anything for a long, long time. She had to do something for the fragile, endangered habitat with its fish, mollusks, worms, crustaceans, and many more.

She used her money to create a lab at her aunt’s house. She worked tirelessly—endlessly—sleeping only when she had to.

"It’s what Mom and Dad would have done," she thought.

Sophie's best friend, Sam, would hang out with her every day—eating pizza, fries, and whatever else he could get his hands on, keeping her company with his humor while she worked on her experiments. And now, she has a biological solution in her hands.

She hesitated at the door to the labs. Nervously, she shifted her lab report from one hand to the other.

"I know that I have an innovative approach to solving the coral reef issue and I know I can help," she said to no one.

The image of being ridiculed by these professors, delayed her entry. She stood outside the door, wanting to run back—wanting to hide—glued to the icy spot.

"Hey, Sophie!" She turned at the unexpected sound of Sam’s voice.

"I’ve been…trying to catch up with you," he panted, out of breath. "Let’s go in and…show them…what you’ve got."

Sophie tilted her head, smiled at Sam and opened the door. She walked confidently to the front, laid out her research on the podium and began her presentation. When her presentation ended, it was to the enthusiastic sound of the scientists’ applause.

Part 1–Graphic Organizer
Graphic Organizer


Setting:

Protagonist:

Rising Action:

Conflict:

Climax:

Falling Action:

Resolution:

Part 2–How does the theme develop?
Write a one paragraph analysis of the story that explains how theme develops in, "The Reefs."

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Answer:

Setting:

in science lab at the High School in New York.

protagonist

Sophie and Sam

climax of the story 

is that Sam her best friend, gave Sophie confidence to present her research.

Rising Action:

The rising action in the story was when it said “… something shifted inside her.” In "The Reefs" Sophie is worrying about solving this environmental issue.

The climax

of the story is that Sam her best friend, gave Sophie confidence to present her research.

The falling action of this story

is that Sophie gained enough confidence to present her research.

The resolution is that the Scientist enjoyed her speech

In "The Reefs" Sophie is worrying about solving this environmental issue. She is talking to herself about this issue. She saying "Your just a high school kid" and "What am I doing...I have been warned". After a snorkeling trip she finally knows what to do. After having her friend Sam over she finally has the biological solution in hand. After her presentation she gets a resounding applause.

How does you describe Ms.Marvel

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Answer:

Long stretch arms, not look good, captain marvel better than her.

Explanation:

2+2=22

Not good looking, strong, long arms lol

How does the female protagonist’s role in the Chopin text(The Story of an Hour) compare to that of Elizabeth Proctor, Abigail Williams, or John Proctor in The Crucible?

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Answer:

The female protagonist is Mrs. Mallard and she compares to Elizabeth Proctor who had to endure the knowledge of her husband's infidelity because she, that is Mrs. Mallard also had to endure her husband's meanness to her.

Explanation:

From the Story of an Hour, we learn of a woman named Mrs. Mallard who suffered from heart disease. At the beginning of the story, one of their family friends named Richards received news of the death of Brently Mallard the husband of Mrs. Mallard.

When the news was broken to Mrs. Mallard, she cried initially but became happy later knowing that she was now free from her husband's control. Her case is similar to that of Elizabeth Proctor who had to endure the knowledge of her husband's adultery with Abigail Williams.

Anyone as obsessed with Ariana Grande's "34+35" as I am? I can't get enough of it!

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Answer:

wdym lol

Explanation:

Yessss the whole album is immaculate loll

Question 8 of 10
What is the relationship between first-person point of view and bias?
A. Because first-person point of view is told from the perspective of
the narrator, the outlook is usually objective.
B. Because first-person point of view is the most personal, the
narrator's version of events is often opinionated.
C. Because first-person point of view is the most impartial, the
characters' emotions rarely come into play.
D. Because first-person point of view shares the thoughts of many
characters, their feelings are out in the open.

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Answer:

b

first person pov is often bias bc you dot see it from other perspectives

Answer:

B

Explanation:

It's B because the first person-point of view is in my opinion the most personal. And as it is told from the point of the narrator, the narrator's version of events are opinionated because off what the narrator has perceived.

what are your thoughts about how pandemics change society?

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Answer:

my thoughts on how pandemics change society are that they are very challengeing

PLEASE HURRY IM ON A TIME LIMIT TY

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Answer:

false

Explanation:

he hunts him instead

i would probably say false. good luck!!!

Mariette wanted to get on with her life, but she couldn't let go of what might be her future if Bob hadn't interfered. She could have been a famous singer
and actress, but Bob garnered all of the attention for himself and pushed her to the sidelines where she never got the attention she deserved.
Mariette vowed she would never forgive him.
What is the tone of this excerpt?
O Bitter
O Compassionate
O Sympathetic

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Answer:

bitter

Explanation:

Bitter means to be angry and hold grudges as you can see Mariette was holding a grudge toward Bob because he got all the attention and she did not. Therefore she was bitter.

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Which type of rhetoric is used in this sentence?
Eating fruits,vegetables, and whole grains will give you the energy to enjoy more activities like biking and hiking.
A.Bias
B.Pathos
C.Ethos
D.Logos

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Answer:

D. Logos

Explanation:

because it is a fact that healthy eating gives you more energy.

Hope this helped

Answer to the question:

D.) Logos

i made a new years resolution to be generous but i gave in to avarice instead.
greed? generosity? threats?

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Answer:

threats

Explanation:

bc they are bad

Read the Greek myth "Midas" retold by Thomas Bulfinch and answer the question.

[1] Bacchus, on a certain occasion, found his old schoolmaster and foster-father, Silenus, missing. The old man had been drinking, and in that state wandered away, and was found by some peasants, who carried him to their king, Midas. Midas recognized him, and treated him hospitably, entertaining him for ten days and nights with an unceasing round of jollity.

[2] On the eleventh day he brought Silenus back, and restored him in safety to his pupil. Whereupon Bacchus offered Midas his choice of a reward, whatever he might wish. He asked that whatever he might touch should be changed into gold. Bacchus consented, though sorry that he had not made a better choice.

[3] Midas went his way, rejoicing in his new-acquired power, which he hastened to put to the test. He could scarce believe his eyes when he found a twig of an oak, which he plucked from the branch, become gold in his hand. He took up a stone; it changed to gold. He touched a sod; it did the same. He took up an apple from the tree; you would have thought he had robbed the garden of the Hesperides. His joy knew no bounds, and as soon as he got home, he ordered the servants to set a splendid repast on the table. Then he found to his dismay that whether he touched bread, it hardened in his hand; or put a morsel to his lip, it defied his teeth. He took a glass of wine, but it flowed down his throat like melted gold.

[4] In consternation at the unprecedented affliction, he strove to divest himself of his power; he hated the gift he had lately coveted. But all in vain; starvation seemed to await him. He raised his arms, all shining with gold, in prayer to Bacchus, begging to be delivered from his glittering destruction. Bacchus, merciful deity, heard and consented. "Go," said he, "to River Pactolus, trace its fountain-head, there plunge yourself and body in, and wash away your fault and its punishment." He did so, and scarce had he touched the waters before the gold-creating power passed into them, and the river sands became changed into gold, as they remain to this day.

Select two key details that could be included in a summary of the myth.

A. Bacchus sent Midas to the river to wash away his golden touch.
B. Bacchus sometimes found his teacher Silenus missing.
C. Midas could not eat because of the wish Bacchus granted.
D. Midas entertained Silenus in his kingdom for ten days.
E. Silenus was found by peasants and carried to Midas.

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Answer: A and C

Explanation:

LC)Select the correctly punctuated sentence.

She walked down the long winding road.
She walked down the long, winding road.
She walked down the long winding, road.
She walked down the long, winding, road.

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Answer:

I think the first one is true

Explanation:

Answer:

"She walked down the long, winding road."

Explanation:

There are two adjectives describing the word "road". You could either add the conjunction "and" or just mark with a comma (,).

Hope this helps! :)


What does Parallelism mean like the definition and also context please

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Answer:

Parallelism means being in the state of being parallel or of corresponding in some way.

Explanation:

An example of a (Non-parallel) this is a sentence like "I want to go swimming and to get my nails done." But a parallel sentence would be like" I will go swimming then after I will go get my nails done."

Parallelism means to be in balance with or corresponding to something.

In grammar, it means that a sentence containing a series of items has a similar structure.

Example:

On our trip, we can go camping and hiking.

Incorrect:

On our trip we can go camping and hike.

Mary and Ann ___ chess at the moment.

a) are playing
b) were playing
c) play
d) played​

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Answer:

A- Are playing

Mary and Ann are playing chess at the moment.

The correct helping verb that should be used in the given blank is "are playing". Mary and Ann are playing chess at the moment. Thus, option A is correct.

Helping verbs, also known as auxiliary verbs, are used in conjunction with main verbs to express various aspects such as tense, mood, voice, or emphasis. They "help" the main verb by providing additional information about the action or state of being. Here are some common helping verbs in English:

"Be" verbs: am, is, are, was, were, be, being, been. Example: I am studying for my exam."Do" verbs: do, does, did. Example: She does her homework every day."Have" verbs: have, has, had. Example: They had already left when I arrived.Modal verbs: can, could, may, might, shall, should, will, would, must
Example: You should take your umbrella in case it rains."Would" and "should" can also function as conditional helping verbs. Example: If I had more time, I would go on vacation.Thus, option A is correct.

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Is this a Physical Characteristics "I have hair issues" or I used "Glorious Heavenly Sunshine"? Yes or No

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Answer:

i have hair issues ( Yes )

Explanation:

If these physical characteristics refer to a person then we can consider that as a YES

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